All Comments on 'Exclusive Club Remembered Ch. 01'

will you finish the story this time or let readers wait for nothing again?

Nicely done. I love reading the woman's perspective!

A fresh angle found to relive past outrage. Whew ! This seems perversely more intense then earlier version. Is it just the lapse of time, because that one seemed full-on incendiary at that time? The best thing here is that so far " nothing " has happened, yet the sense of foreboding given is akin to when the jungle suddenly goes silent.

Usually I'd be complaining about the brevity of the story. This was so intense so any objections of that nature are precluded. Full Marks.

I was hoping for another chapter after the first three, to explain what went next and if and how they ever got home - and how it affected them after they were home. This is even better. We know now they got home and now you're showing us the woman's view. I hope it is as fun as I remember the previous three were. I need to re-read them to make sure.

Been looking forward to this, does it go further than the last instalments? I hope so. Hurry with chapter 2!

MINUS 5*!!!