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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/01/13

Brutal

Tough to read, please have someone proof-read and edit your stories before posting.

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by Anonymous05/01/13

Worst ever

Get an editor, a proof reader..................clean this mess up and make it readable.

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by Anonymous05/02/13

edit

Have someone help you write better.

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by Anonymous05/07/13

Minus Five Stars

One of the worst things I've ever read!

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by Anonymous05/07/13

Lame

It reads terrible and sounds like it was written by a high school sophomore. Sorry to be so harsh but it's awful to read with misspellings, grammatical errors, and a very poor plot. Try again and at least make it more plausible.

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by Anonymous05/09/13

bitch bitch bitch

All they can do is bitch. Nothing in their life must be good

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by Anonymous07/05/13

This is a fine story of hot sisterfucking

I don't know what the naysayers are yapping about. Here's a boy who's always hard around his cute sister, who gets real wet for her kid brother. What's more natural than that the boy sticks his fat young cock up his sister's very willing cunt, gives her a great hot incestuous fuck, and unloads his brotherly balls up her sisterly twat? Up his sister's twat is where a brother's sperm belongs.

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by Anonymous10/02/15

screw the FAKE raves this story sucks

no beginning no end just a piss poor middle that never should have been posted. this is a first draft of a second chapter not a stand alone ready for posting.

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by Anonymous10/02/15

NO dear annony screw you you dumb fuck!

This story is great!! you're the biggest asshole on Lit, or in the fucking world. Your mother should have put you in sack and thrown your sorry ass into the shit recycle plant! 5 for effort and content. Great story! I'm telling you if this shit for brains annony writes he she it IT doesn't like it , it means it's a good story

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