you are sick in the head
Well written, a bit different, clever ending. Overall a good job. Best to ignore those who give psychological opinions based on reading a fictional item. They give us 'anonymous' readers a bad name!
great story. i would love if there was a sequel so she could find out who he is.
VV
She should have broken his arm at the end anyway.
Firstly, this would have been a better fit for the nc/r category. Secondly, it shouldn't be too hard to track down the guy's identity.
I loved this! Wish I could have given it 5stars+++
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Fucking rubbish
you are sick in the head
Well written, a bit different, clever ending. Overall a good job.
Best to ignore those who give psychological opinions based on reading a fictional item. They give us 'anonymous' readers a bad name!
great story. i would love if there was a sequel so she could find out who he is.
VV
not bad. somewhat different
She should have broken his arm at the end anyway.
Firstly, this would have been a better fit for the nc/r category. Secondly, it shouldn't be too hard to track down the guy's identity.
fantastic!!
I loved this! Wish I could have given it 5stars+++
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