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SweetOblivionalmost 11 years agoYou probably need to try to write better poetry for a start
Cliched couplets that stretch the rhyming pattern but not the imagination are not the way to make anyone believe, unless you are seeking a job in writing schmaltz for Hallmark cards. S.O.
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So I been reading Literotica for a while now. Sometimes it's good, sometimes not so much. Had occasions where I asked myself if anything I have to say about a story would matter, so I registered and figured I may as well at least admit how I feel about a story when the occasio...
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