All Comments on 'A Very Modern Family Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
NOOOOOOOOO!!!@

dont end the series! add alex and her goth friend! anything to keep it going!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Excellent series, great work. A shame it has to end, but I'll be looking forward to your next story series for sure! You work some good comedy into the sex.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

"Come on Pheeel!" hahaha, love it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Please dont end

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
No Dont stop

this is awesome! plus sp many combinations still to be made, I want to see alex and hayley hook up then get fucked by dylan

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
No Alex

it's a shame you're not thinking about including alex to round up the dunphy girls

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Next series

Do another modern family one. I think you should include Luke and especially Alex. I really enjoyed this story a lot

pheonixstar82pheonixstar82over 10 years ago
series

Like the comments before, l'd like to see more, l hope you will be inspired to write more, there are plenty of combinations to write about or senarios with the same combinations. Thank you though for writting these, l will keep an eye out for your other works too.

imready2imready2almost 10 years ago
good series

This last one was definitely the hottest. Every male's dream of a "Gloria and Claire" together, although even this old guy, as creepy as it sounds would love to read about Alex's cherry being broken by a strapped up Haley, of course with Gloria and Claire's guidance. Luke's virginity could be taken as well. Please consider it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

This story can continue, I dont know how kinky you are but I would have loved to see some cuckolding. In your story Jay has no idea about Gloria and Jay, cuckold Jay. Also it would be quite kinky ff there were more bi/gay incest among the males.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

If you were to keep the story going you could do a story of Hayley is master baiting in her bed at night when suddenly Alex comes into the room after coming back from college next would be Hayley teaching Alex how to masterbait and how to lick pussy extra but please keep it going great series

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

WTH is "hard as nice"?!

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