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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Your best poem, but the last two lines are weak.

A five, to reward improvement.

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So I been reading Literotica for a while now. Sometimes it's good, sometimes not so much. Had occasions where I asked myself if anything I have to say about a story would matter, so I registered and figured I may as well at least admit how I feel about a story when the occasio...

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