by Robert_Anthony
Not my favorite type of story but I liked it much better than most. It was between just them and there was strong control but not degradation. You packed a lot of psychological drama in with the action and without a lot of extraneous crap (figure stats, specific history, stupid plots devices like blackmail). I also like that it is clear HE wants this and has not been slowly manipulated to it. All in all, enjoyable.
...your writing is better than average, and I've been following your writing since well before your name changed.
Not going to score this one, because I'm not really in the target audience, and I fear I'd score it lower than it deserves because it isn't really my type of story.
Your orgasm denial stories are the best on this site and I always get a couple of new ideas from your work. Thanks
Really hot! I say this from the woman's perspective. I agree with the commenter who said this was free of the annoying extraneous plot devices that usually accompany this kink, and I enjoyed that very much. Also loved the ball-slapping and the little game she played. You almost had me convinced she was going to let him come. ;) Hot.
Then, before she causes you permanent damage, toss the bitch to the curb and be done with her.
I also think that your orgasm denial stories are the best on this site. You must ignore the idiots that make such stupid comments (like the one below) - thanks once again.
Was her blood, after he broke her nose, blackened her eye and threw her out on her ass. Because who would stay with a whore that treated him like that?
So, he's full of guilt over something and she's just a selfish bully. Was she raped as a child and needs to avoid penetration and take her anger out on him?
Or is she getting her cunt filled elsewhere?
She is not doing anything to him out of love!
The husband is an asshole! Not being allowed to cum for a month?!Ruined orgasm?! I'll bet he digs post-orgasmic torture,and he'll soon be wearing a cock cage! As I said,an asshole!
I'm not a big femdom/denial/quasi-torture fan, but you are one of the best writers in the genre posting on Lit. As the other anon said, good to not have an overload of kinks, no forced fem, forced bi, blackmail, taking over his possessions. I can respect a strong woman controlling a man who does want what is being done.
I really enjoy your writing! The women in your stories are enjoyably sadistic! I would love to see a post-orgasm torture story by you. Your style of writing really lends itself well to Femdom literature.
As for Goodhue... he has a cock up his ass or something.
tease and denial until he cannot hold back. the gentle with the painful. the dream/nightmare for all submissives. wonderful.
Katherine really seems to know how arouse him to the point of no return. Her ball torture leads him to ejaculate without his control. She has taken this, his most precious ability away and added it to her control of him .Heavenly humiliation. Now will she let her best friend watch?or play?