Unbelievable! Too sudden. Needs more build up. More details of the forest/vines. Magic? Fetrilizer? Experiment?
Needs more questions answered. To be attacked by nature and then not be freaked out and decide to stay till morning. To many unanswered questions.
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Unbelievable!
Unbelievable! Too sudden. Needs more build up. More details of the forest/vines. Magic? Fetrilizer? Experiment?
Good base line
Needs more questions answered. To be attacked by nature and then not be freaked out and decide to stay till morning. To many unanswered questions.
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