by skinnyboy38
a too good to be true quality, that I really like. The last line seems like something of an empty promise because life is never all perfect--and that odd ending following all these wonderful promises makes your poem, to me, rather special. Keep working on your writing: I think you have a talent for it. :-)
Sir, this is one of my VERY favorites... Speaks to a part of me that desperately needed to hear these words. Thank you...