Cheating

I Knew It

Nice quick tale. I figured it out early but it took nothing away from the story.

Too short

It was obvious that the photos were going to be fakes, but that was okay. The interesting part of the story would have been the confrontation, angst, and dialog after the husband found out what happened.

dead friend

She's in a lot of trouble, marriage salvageable. He's dead to me, after I make his life hell.

yes

dear ole trevor will definitely hear about this as will his wife..and as far as trevor goes his face better never darken my doorstep again other wise he will flat fucking die. may yet ..as for wife well she better find me a lady friend to fuck also..she is the one who fucked trevor because she didn't trust hiubby..so hubby should get that pussy he didn't get for real ..just for what she did..i hope trevors wife divorces him also..would be nice if trevors wife fucked him but make it a real fuck

can anybody

be that dumb i don't think, i would say this story belongs in humor would love to see a follow up where the husband finds out and kicks the piece of garbage to the curb, but i read some of your other stories and that wouldn't happen.

Crime without punishment lowered your score.

dumb stupid and OBVIOUS

yawn...

Next

What Next....no tension here, but you could develop some depending on what happens next...does she tell, does Trevor blackmail her, or does she want a re-match? Kind of boring up to here, but potential is there...

Not Gonna

I do like short stories like this. Not really a new idea, but still a twist ending is fun.

For the commentors who think there will be some punishment from Mike towards Trevor I hate to rain on your parade but I doubt she will tell him that she fell for the trick. But mabye she can get him back in a sequel --that could be interesting.

Forgot

You forgot two things: 1) You should have labeled this as Chapter 1, or the like. 2) Give us a clue as to Wifey's anger and plans. Please finish this story.

why even waste your time writing this. You have maybe half a story here. If it is just a first chapter you should indicate that. As it is this kind of story sucks and can't figure out why you would publish it this way!?!?

Been waiting for PhotoShop

Good to see PhotoShop has finally arrived at LW. Agree this is just a part of a story! Sweetie has an interesting puzzle ahead. Also agree that Ch1 needs to be on first posting of a sequel.

Once again...

We have a story with very little effort put into it. First; it is a much overused plot. If you're going to re-hash a story that's already been re-hashed multiple times, at least use some creativity in doing it; make it your own. Unfortunately that was not done here.

Stupid Slut and a dead friend

This has been done much better.

Saw it comming

I saw it comming photoshop is to easy nowadays but she still has to deal with the problem that it has created now. someone said sequel yea but for a down and dirty quick story it was a good one.

Downhill From Here, Right?

Cute tale as it is, but chapter two should not be written.

Another stupid bitch that will believe any thing bad someone tellsthem about thierhusbands

What a dumb cunt and a dumb story

Takes this guys word without checking with her husband. Time for a divorce .dumb writers story.

bull

ooops!!!

A bit short

but still a good story

is this what it become now

dumber and dumber.

Dumb cunt

fell for it. I love Photoshop. Trevor

Thanks***

For the read.

simple, no real plot, story not developed...not worth reading

Needs more substance

So.....who cuts off Trevor's equipment and sends it through grinder? How does Mike respond to his wife's lack of communication?

Needs more development. Good start and premise, just needs to be fleshed out and completed.

4****! Too short for a 5***** rating.

It is not a big loss; she got an education. And, certainly she will not tell her husband since her indiscretion is best left unsaid and forgotten.

someone will talk, they always do and then it happens there will be blood, lots of red fresh runny blood.

And then...

What happened? Rated it a #1 for unfinished story.

It's a "short story", so leave it be

The point of a "short story" is that it doesn't get over-developed. the rest is up to the reader to consider. I thought it delivered its point well.

I gave it 5 stars ...

... When he finds out (they always find out), he should beat the crap out of him and divorce her (stupid bitch).
Panther Fan.

Nice work.

Clever, old chap, really quite clever. Good job, well done.

Well written - great humor.

Great

wife lead down the road ... awesome

That's it

To short , no conclusion!