Really don't know where to start with analysing this one. Could have done with a story line. There were hints about a story, but they didn't come to anything. There was a start, some sex and then it ended. No middle and no real ending.
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Anonymous05/03/13
I don't think that all stories on Literotica have to have a strong plot. Some can just be a sex scene (or scenes) and that's enough. All in all I liked this one. I thought it was naughty and sweet and I enjoyed it.
English
Rather uninspiring
Really don't know where to start with analysing this one. Could have done with a story line. There were hints about a story, but they didn't come to anything. There was a start, some sex and then it ended. No middle and no real ending.
I don't think that all stories on Literotica have to have a strong plot. Some can just be a sex scene (or scenes) and that's enough. All in all I liked this one. I thought it was naughty and sweet and I enjoyed it.
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