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I'm ready to go. Just not down in those hulls where the stowaways were. Actually the line about the stowaways I found a bit unsettling in a poem that seems otherwise to celebrate spring and the sea (and the sea in spring, at its most appealing perhaps?). So I'm not sure if that line is intentional (it does add an interesting tension) or not. Either way, I gave it a 5. I miss being near the sea: your poem gives a little of it back to me.
Thank you
Ange - the "stowaways" are the barnacles etc. that attach themselves to the bottom of a boats exterior and have to be scraped off each spring - not some mysterious villian hiding in the hold. :-D I always appreciate that you've read my stuff.
well
done
Very nice read
indeed.
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