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by Anonymous

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by Sidney4305/03/13

Ahh, the inestimable value of a good story.

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by angieslover05/03/13

WTF

WTF OVER

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by Alberta Al05/03/13

I didn't get it

But it was a well written story.

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by MatthewVett05/03/13

Author Here

I have to admit, angieslover is the best comment so far.

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by LadyVer05/05/13

Good story

It held my interest unil the end. I was surprised the old man lost his head though. Didn't see that coming. :) I could see the story becoming a series.

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