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oh wowwwwwwwwwww
i had to quickly go find my toy and insert it so i could masterbate while reading it,
A ALMOST PERFECT HARD ON
Brilliantly written i got hard very quickly and it still ain't down!!!
Excellent
Extremely well-written for erotica, very sensuous and romantic. As well as being very arousing, this story is also beautifully crafted, and I highly reccomend it.
grammar
liked it, but this is driving me crazy.
it is An Amazing-- not a amazing
Erotica at close to its best.
The chapter flowed with a wondrfully sensuous, undulating rythem which is what seperates erotica from pornography. The understated presence of incest between sisters and also in images of the father's erection served to lift the tale beyond the societal taboos to a plane of pure, exstatic love making. really excellent.
Oh well
Wouldn't it be nice if you got someone to go on the record there Bill? You a bunch of anonymous fans and me. I ALWAYS ID myself! The story was fucking HOT Wm. Loved it alot!
Wow!
This story turned me on so much that I had to masturbate immediately! Very erotic!
fucking hot!!!
that was the best erotica i ve ever read!! keep it going! i wish i could do that with a woman!
Very well writtin, Thank You!
I felt like I was there and had a sister. That is how good stories should make the reader feel. My congratulations on a good job. Whhheeeewww....by the way, hehehe.
WOW
WOW wow Wow OMG That was GREAT!!
OMG!
This was awesome! I thought it was going to be boring, but in the middle of it, I had to masturbate!! This was great. I will definately read again!
it made me so horny i masterbated all afternoon ..
i wish i could be Beth and be the one with lynn....my pussy is soaking wet ..... OMG!!!!
confused
Im so confused. like i jus dnt get it in this one u say that the girls have nevet touched eachothers pussies except for through panties but in chapters 2-4 they had that hot shower scene n they deyy touched eachothers pussies. the whole thing jus confuses me. like dnt get me wrong i fuckin love ur stories they make me soooo wet i always masturbate. i jus cant help it but it would really help me if i could jus understand it while readin.
On The Record
On th'record, I loved it!
Better
Your stories only get better and better. Anyone reading them should realise that they are all part of a whole.
Thanks for them all and this is the only comment I will write until I finish them all.
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