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by Anonymous

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by Ashesh904/29/13

Dry as a Bible ......hmmm....

Sober as a judge ?!? 5-ed .

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by Angeline04/29/13

Dry as a Bible

is the heart of the poem and placed perfectly to serve that purpose. But why would a person carry an umbrella but go barefoot? Is this a contented poem, an unsettled poem? I'm not really sure but maybe I'm misreading it... It's still a 5.

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by demure10105/01/13

Thank you for the read -

It sounds contented to me :)

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