I liked this very much. I don't usually go for femme dome unless its two women, but this was very good. Well written. Little suggestion, first person is fine, but dialog makes for a more engaging read. All in all 4 stars. Thank you.
The author most surely has experienced so many of the erotic pleasures in these stories she relates in her stories. I say this because she uses so much detail. If not I hope gets to experience this with a sub and she surely has a very erotic imagination. As a sub, I can only dream or wish I could experience this and I would most anything to earn her trust and be worthy of such a beautiful erotic experience! Thank you for writing another erotic stimulating story!
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Great quickie read :)
I liked this very much. I don't usually go for femme dome unless its two women, but this was very good. Well written. Little suggestion, first person is fine, but dialog makes for a more engaging read. All in all 4 stars. Thank you.
Another very erotic story...
The author most surely has experienced so many of the erotic pleasures in these stories she relates in her stories. I say this because she uses so much detail. If not I hope gets to experience this with a sub and she surely has a very erotic imagination. As a sub, I can only dream or wish I could experience this and I would most anything to earn her trust and be worthy of such a beautiful erotic experience! Thank you for writing another erotic stimulating story!
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