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My Wife is a Party Girl

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/02/13

Another WACC writer

Makes me sick to think that MAN had stoop so low in self esteem especially Man in the U.S.

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by Anonymous05/02/13

Amen Anon

It is unbelievable how low it has gotten.
So Amen Anon

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by Anonymous05/02/13

Dumb Just Plain Dumb

Cuckold central. Why?

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by Anonymous05/02/13

can you imagine

someone going to war to defend this useless troll anybody that would write this garbage is a good reason for abortion.

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by Anonymous05/02/13

Wonder how long

these 2 bitches could swim if tied to an anchor...

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by Anonymous05/02/13

Another cuck tale...

How original! Good for a "1" because no "0."

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by Anonymous05/02/13

yep

same as some others
voted a 1 star because there is not a ZERO

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by Anonymous05/02/13

Text Back

Don't bother coming back home, at least for a week.

I'm moving all of my things to my new apartment and seeing an attorney with your pics Monday morning!

BTW, keep a copy of the pics in your computer, her cheating or just the pics, either or both give your hand great pleasure!

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by Anonymous05/02/13

Good fun story and pretty hot.

Never mind the cucked crew getting their ex-wives panties in a twist and taking it out on you. Five stars.

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by t_i_n_a05/02/13

It is hot....

But I can see all manner of sequels rewriting this to have the guy serving her with divorce papers as she gets off the plane, etc. Could be fun!

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by Anonymous05/02/13

Sooooooooo Hot!!!!!

Every man has seen a party girl in action, probably was one of the guys that fucked her. Then to see your own wife as party girl in phone pics. Oh man. No wonder he jerked off all night. Being married to a party girl can have excitement like no other. I know. I'm married to one.

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by Anonymous05/02/13

That's all we need here is another fucking sicko. This is getting real old every day! You have a FETISH you sick fuck! So post in FETISH you sick fuck!!!

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by Anonymous05/02/13

He needs to get pissed!

I 'd like to see get home and think she got away with it until her husband shows her the pictures her friend sent. She gets pissed at the friend and then gets hers. Move out bitch!

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by Anonymous05/02/13

DIVORCE

Seriously, man? You're turned on by your wife doing shit with other guys, that she probably doesn't do with you? You need to either get divorced or turn the tables and pick up a few broads on the side.

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by Anonymous05/02/13

[text] you a cuckold and a pretty sorry one at that

[text] me, the cab driver and the bell hop just fucked your slut

[text] 1 star

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by Anonymous05/02/13

Female opinion

Just.......sad.
I couldn't be and don't want to know either of these skanks. This type and the douche bags they 'party' with actually live this way and drag their crap through the world damaging other people's lives. So, hard to enjoy this as fantasy.

The writing style presented the story well. Easy to imagine getting those messages.

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by Lickideesplit05/02/13

Reply

Wifey: (2:35am) - Rach...you only posted these pics to me, so I have corrected your oversight and copied them to Steph's family...I'll call and wake them right after I send this text. That way, they'll be sure to have seen them when Steph gets back to their place this morning! They'll probably have toast to go with the eggs and sausage with gravy she devoured at the party! She'll probably also want to call and change her return flight to spend a lot more time with them and her loyal friends, like you! Ciao!

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by Anonymous05/02/13

the only thing I like

about this story is by Lickideesplit answer + that she could stay there aswell and Rach would have her again as roomate.

-10 if there would be.

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by Anonymous05/02/13

2b42

Pretty erotic and a novel touch. Don't listen to the critics, If they don't like this kind of stuff why are they reading it??
Easylove

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by Anonymous05/02/13

re: 2b42

I love people who hate it when others dare have an opinion different from theirs.

Also, if you can tell what is in a story without reading it, that's a pretty good indication it sucks.

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by higginsworld05/02/13

Good story

Hope you continue writing and ignore all the cowards that leave anonymous posts. Honestly, I'll never understand why some people insist on reading stories they know they won't enjoy just so they can leave ugly comments. Well, ugly is as ugly does.

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by TornadoTys05/02/13

phone pics

Rachel may delete from his wifes phone, however husband has pics on his phone and straight to divorce solicitor and websites !

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by Anonymous05/02/13

date rape drug?

Ok. If there ain't a part two where the in-laws aren't drug into this to grab the cheating slut by her ears back home or if the police aren't called in to investigate date rape drug use and in the process send caniving bitch Rachel up the river for 10 years, then I'll take my first plunge and write one for it. This ending just screams for that kind of second part.

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by Anonymous05/02/13

willing cuckold?

Ok so he beat off to the visions of sex. I'm not sure I wouldn't either. BUT, still doesn't mean she ain't getting kicked to the curb.

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by Anonymous05/02/13

Good concept w/ the way it developed w/ the pictures on the phone.

And solidly written. Am always surprised by the popularity of the masochistic-loser-husband genre though. Might have been more interesting if he'd reacted w anger but couldn't stop watching the pictures because he couldn't believe what he was seeing or something. Would have been more realistic, but wouldn't have fit the genre I guess.

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by Anonymous05/02/13

Garbage

There wasn't enough wimp, cuckold, BS on this site already to suit you? Guess not. Might have been an interesting story, if you hadn't made the husband a pathetic looser, and instead of jerking off he had reacted by realizing that a wife like that is not worth having. He should have changed the locks, not responded to the phone, not picked her up, and filed for divorce.

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by Anonymous05/02/13

How lucky can a man get?

A flabby body, a tiny dick, and a wife who apparently couldn't care less about him.

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by Anonymous05/02/13

Sick

A slut and a pathic loser, really, I'm supposed to care?

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by Anonymous05/02/13

WTF another loser that jacks off to pictures enjoying a cock much larger than his, and to being put down by Jackie and his whore of a wife, er cheap slut she probably didn't charge the guy for filling her with his sperm. And,,, his wife knew exactly what was going on. Hope they a;; get AIDS and die

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by SparksWillFly05/02/13

Honestly

I'd like to have a frank objective discussion with a husband who enjoys seeing his wife having sex with other men. Sure, I would start with pre-conceived bias, but I truly want to understand. On the surface, you seem emotionally disturbed, needing to be submissive and humiliated, in fact relishing these feelings. How did that happen to you? Was your mother domineering, your father dominated? Were you mistreated in your life so much that you began to enjoy it? I find these stories troubling and soon begin to have concern and sympathy for you.

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by disturbedhrt05/02/13

cuck story

Notice it a hot wife and a small dicked fat husband who jerks off to pics
Same shit different author

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by Anonymous05/03/13

I agree with "2b42" and "Good Story"

By all means keep writing,just don't make the mistake of writing the same story with a different wrapper. It truly was a novel approach using the cell phone to tell a story along with an accomplice to caption the pics. Keep fueling your imagination with a new story, a new kink, an unexpected resolution, whatever ...

And whatever you do, don't pay any attention to the idiots who have no idea what fiction is or creative writing for that matter.
Type on!!

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by m48gunner05/03/13

The End

So...the end of a marriage, or the start of a cluck wimp tale....How can he be so accepting of a cheating wife..it is not like they discussed it before hand, she just went on a trip and became a cheating wife. Where is the love in that? So now he either becomes a wimp cuckold, or the leaves his cheating wife! Question, does she tell him the truth, or does she become a liar as well as a cheat?

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by Anonymous05/03/13

Good time for wife

the problem is they have been married for just one year and she cheats big time. Not only that her friend sends the photos to hubby with or without her knowledge. She is not going to stop and the cheating will probably become more frequent. Also she had unprotected sex so who knows what she caught or what may be in the oven. Of course it is your decision to make but I have a feeling that Rachel will let her know what she did (photos) if you don't confront her. I think your right hand and throbbing piece of meat will be spending a lot of time together. Well written.

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by Anonymous05/03/13

Photos

Are we really to believe wifey did not know the photo's were being taken and messages sent back home? There were 14 photo messages in all? Maybe she was just too drunk on cock to notice?

I enjoyed the read. I love a good cheating wife story. Not convinced about the "how did I get so lucky" statement. What you got was a cheating party girl, but we all get what we deserve.

Maybe the administrators could create a new cuckold category to satisfy the haters. Would reduce the loving wives stories down by 90% though.

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by Anonymous05/03/13

And Rachel lives out the week why?

there is absolutely nothing that stops the husband from fucking up Rachel big time, and the wife big time. In case you missed it, he has all the pictures. I would simply walk up to Rachel and pour acid in her face... she'd never be fucked again... ahhhh that's right! that's why normal people don't do anything even remotely like this shit. This shit that only pathetic losers who CAN'T GET SEX ON THEIR OWN SIT HERE AND POST TO THIS SITE!

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by Anonymous05/03/13

Have to agree with the anon below - this skank deserves the "acid-facial" like similar manipulative sluts.

Fuck the slut and move on to better female company.

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by Anonymous05/03/13

pure BS

divorce the slut, she chose her action
if in one year she fucks around no need to keep her cause you wont

cucks are a form of mental illness, and mental illness is not erotic

try and get the bitch burned down that caused the collapse of your marriage

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by MrsCanyon05/03/13

Share and share alike

Don't pay attention to all the negative comments.
Listen you have a good time. Your wife had a good time. The guys had a good time.
It was a win win win all around with no one hurt. Nothing wrong with that.
Maybe you should share more often.
Anyway, 5 stars.

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by Anonymous05/03/13

Sounds like my kind of woman, although a threesome sent over the phone would have been great too! Loved it.

Tifani

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by Anonymous05/03/13

well written story.

to all the negative commentators, the story is about a cheating wife, so why get your panties up in a bunch over that?

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by BobNbobbi05/03/13

Interesting vignette

A few hours of party fun by text and pictures. As a story I think a little more of hubby's angst would up the excitement level. Still in all, not bad.

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by hansbwl05/03/13

Lucky?

He called himself lucky. I would rather say there are reasons to call him very unlucky indeed.

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by Anonymous05/03/13

please tell up front

It's A Wimp Story To Avoid Wasting Time, Another On The Do Not Read List.

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by rjordan05/03/13

Simple, effective

I thought the writer did a good job of building tension in a story that is very simple and often told.

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by Anonymous05/03/13

great story

love the text conversations, very sexy and relatable.

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by Anonymous05/04/13

Could have been much better if he weren´t such a wimp. Imagine the possible developements that could have happened if he would havé reacted appropriatly.
Instead, you chose to characterize a wimp, a failure, getting himself off - even though he claims himself to be jealous...doesn´t really fit.

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by DWornock05/04/13

3***! Could have been 5***** if more realistic.

The basic story is good. That is a young pretty wife goes on a trip and ends up having sex with a couple of exceptionally good looking hot guys. And, Rachel finds it entertaining to stir up trouble by sending texts and photo of his wife have sex with the hot guys.

However, it is unrealistic that her husband would be so wimpy because if she is good looking she could have and therefore would have married better. It is realistic that hotter guys than her husband would have sex with her since for one-night stands pretty women can and do demand exceptionally attractive guys.

Also, it is unreaslistic to have so much difference in penis sizes. It would be realistic if the husband was half-inch less than the mean length of about 5.88 inches and if the other guys had a larger penis perhaps even 7 inches. However, 9 inches is so rare and adnormal that any guy with a 9 inch penis would most likely be defective and certainly he would not be attractive.

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by worldx05/05/13

=)

Great story! Keep it up!

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by Erotonaut05/05/13

Welcome to Hell

" I figured since I can't stop it, I might as well enjoy myself."
The standard cry of the idiot cuckold. By this point, I suspect even his drunken slut of a wife wouldn't dismiss him as "a controlling jerk" should he 'phone and tell her to get the hell out of there. (That said, Rachel has the cell.)

" I took some small amount of solace in thinking she was just giving head and not fucking any of them"
Yeah, like that's going to last.

"Jealous another man was fucking my wife. Jealous I didn't have a big dick like his. I'd never been more turned on. [..] Who would I be to deny her that satisfaction? I will be keeping the pics; I imagine I will be jacking off to them for some time."
Kiss goodbye to trust, and eventually to love.

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