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what a great start , i cant wait to read about the rest of term .
Nice read
liked it....nice setup for further chapters....will be looking for em.......would be nice if male students could also be somehow incorporated....:)
It was okay. Psyche!
Very hot start to a story. Keep it up!
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I really loved it. You jumped straight into action, which i'm not used to, but i love it! straight to the point, maybe some actual lengths - like C cup boobs or 8 inch cock - but maybe you left that out on purpose, which is entirely good as well. leaving it up to the reader's imagination whaat 'big' or 'huge' means.
looking forward to more :)
wouldn't mind seeing 2 shemales having some fun with each other. Maybe Susie has a girlfriend or something?
Good first story
Hi,
I enjoyed your first story...it was quite hot...
Of course, would have loved to see a bit more set-up before the sex but that is just me.
Still I really enjoyed it.
Great story, hoping for more!
World Building
This was a great start but you need to begin fleshing out this world a bit. Not real specifics, just how a world with only woman and shemales has led to such open sexual conduct and whether it is normal or just a college phenomenon. It's not a necessity but it would be appreciated.
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