All Comments on 'Crazy College Days'

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bluesky496bluesky496almost 11 years ago

what a great start , i cant wait to read about the rest of term .

wolf9696wolf9696almost 11 years ago
Nice read

liked it....nice setup for further chapters....will be looking for em.......would be nice if male students could also be somehow incorporated....:)

griffin57griffin57almost 11 years ago
It was okay. Psyche!

Very hot start to a story. Keep it up!

thatlonewolfthatlonewolfalmost 11 years ago
feedback

I really loved it. You jumped straight into action, which i'm not used to, but i love it! straight to the point, maybe some actual lengths - like C cup boobs or 8 inch cock - but maybe you left that out on purpose, which is entirely good as well. leaving it up to the reader's imagination whaat 'big' or 'huge' means.

looking forward to more :)

wouldn't mind seeing 2 shemales having some fun with each other. Maybe Susie has a girlfriend or something?

silkstockingsloversilkstockingsloveralmost 11 years ago
Good first story

Hi,

I enjoyed your first story...it was quite hot...

Of course, would have loved to see a bit more set-up before the sex but that is just me.

Still I really enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Great story, hoping for more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
World Building

This was a great start but you need to begin fleshing out this world a bit. Not real specifics, just how a world with only woman and shemales has led to such open sexual conduct and whether it is normal or just a college phenomenon. It's not a necessity but it would be appreciated.

horny2doithorny2doitalmost 5 years ago

A good story - hopefully it will be less force and more learning to enjoy cock sucking her roommate and Lilly meeting others who are compatible with her. That Susie will appreciate her skills and treat her well. That Lilly will be known well and respected and will love girlie cum . . . thanks !!

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