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All Comments on 'Pantoum for K.B.'

by demure101

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AngelineAngelinealmost 11 years ago
Lovely pantoum

except for the "eyeballs burn" line which sounds a bit clunky to me in an otherwise delicate-feeling poem.

DawnJDawnJalmost 11 years ago
Thank God!

A pretty smile covers a multitude of sins! :). Nicely done!

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