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Your Heart's Desire

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/03/13

This is one of the best stories on here. As a male feminist, I love the emphasis you placed on a woman being more than just a device for pleasure and you coupled sensual passion with elegant sexuality expertly. The professor is a strong character and I enjoyed the development you put into your story

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by Anonymous05/03/13

This is probably one of the better stories I've read here and I've been visiting Literotica for a long time now. Very well written, easy to follow, and nice student/professor relationship development. Is there a part 2?

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by Anonymous05/03/13

keep going

This was an amazing story, I really hope you keep writing and adding more chapters to this story

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by Bahama05/03/13

Keep going

That was one of the best I've read in a long time. Part 2?

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by MGU6705/03/13

more please

A lovely beginning, I do hope there are more stories to tell about these characters. Well done and thanks for sharing.

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by Anonymous05/04/13

HOT!!

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by ava2305/04/13

very well written

would love to read more of Anne's "education".

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by jpb53105/04/13

Nice

Although I get the call for more here, at the same time I think the story stands well on its own and doesn't need additional chapters to be complete.

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by gotrane05/04/13

Classic Story!

This is what writing is all about! Except for an occasional lapse, this is one of, if not the, best stories I've ever read on Literotica. Like some, I'd like to see a sequel, but like others, it can stand on it's own merits. Either way, keep writing and I'll certainly keep reading!

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by Anonymous05/04/13

Ohhhh so wonderful

Oh my, that was so incredibly sexy. Please write more of these two lovely women, they have left me just dripping.

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by Anonymous05/05/13

Great

I love reading student or in this case former student-teacher encounters. I would love for you to continue this story by adding a twist.

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by zypnot05/05/13

Very pleasant read

This is a very nice story, well written and the characters you described overwhelmed me with warm feelings especially while reading how they respect each other. And it is a hot story either.
I love the stories about lesbian love themes most at this site and you've shared a top one with us; thank you for that.
I hope you'll be able to write more of such stories.

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by Anonymous06/30/13

Curious

I absolutely enjoyed it. I've never experienced being with a woman, but it has always been a fantasy. This story just fueled my crave for a woman. I shall follow my heart's desire. Thank you!

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by cyberoptiq04/11/14

HOT!! HOT!! HOT!!

Sounds like a true story from the way it's written...Good job!!

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by Carole_n_Nice09/08/14

I keep checking your bio

I read one of your anal stories, A genre I have never done before and not one that I can say, would ever be my chosen. Nevertheless, I have read several of your stories and I keep flipping back to your bio? To confirm that you actually are a guy because you write like a woman. I submitted a couple of stuff of my own in the last few weeks. I find myself reading your material to suck your brain dry and learn. If plagiarism is the ultimate form of flattery? Then what must learning to copy one's style must be? Thank you. I love what you write, I love how you can somehow give background and keep your story short and I love that I learn from you. C'est bon!

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by schmooworld11/04/14

Great!

Story was great! Loved it. Wish I had a professor like Patricia ;)

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by Anonymous01/03/15

a pussy for breakfast

Quite interesting as how you brought these two women together. I really liked the story especially when Anne was made to stand in front of a window and play with her pussy. I was sitting there reading about it and I was playing with my own pussy. It made reading this part of the story especially nice for me. I hope that you continue with this story but really it is good just as the way that you ended it. Thanks. Betsey

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by redskinsfan696906/10/15

Great story

Love the story and would love to read what happens next

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by mazzme07/02/15

Another hit out of the park!

A.serious positive pattern is forming with this gifted author who knows how to captivate the reader. Enough said!

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by Anonymous07/26/16

I love this

Please tell me there is more or more to come. Because you're a genius. ♡

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by Anonymous07/26/16

Wow. This was sensually erotic.

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by Anonymous08/09/16

Great story!

Could use a bit of proof reading, but the plot and characters were excellent! I'd love to read more on this one.

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by Anonymous12/04/16

I wish it were longer. But all in all it was very good. I like the teacher/student stories even though Anne wasn't Patricia's student anymore.

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