Let the excitement of a sentence speak for itself rather than trying to artifficially make it exciting by adding an exclamation point.
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Anonymous06/21/13
Pretty damn good...
But I have to agree with the first Anonymous in that it needed a bit of arse-fucking, even if it was just that one lucky cunt Alex right at the end! As soon as I saw the words "post script", I was a tad afraid that you'd tell us that 9 months later there was a little bastard running around fathered by one of the Swim Team Seven (could have been hot, but I'm glad you didn't, though!)
Hope to hear about the reunions soon
Down Under Dude
English
Ass play
I really enjoyed this, made me nice and wet but would have enjoyed a bit of ass play thrown in.
Nice, but way too many exclamation points!!!! :D
Let the excitement of a sentence speak for itself rather than trying to artifficially make it exciting by adding an exclamation point.
Pretty damn good...
But I have to agree with the first Anonymous in that it needed a bit of arse-fucking, even if it was just that one lucky cunt Alex right at the end! As soon as I saw the words "post script", I was a tad afraid that you'd tell us that 9 months later there was a little bastard running around fathered by one of the Swim Team Seven (could have been hot, but I'm glad you didn't, though!)
Hope to hear about the reunions soon
Down Under Dude
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