8. Other People's Hearts Ch. 09

Hmmmm

I knew it was coming but it was still harsh. Another really good chapter. Thx.

One of the saddest chappies

It was achingly beautiful. With only simple and few words about Sam and Emma's death, you made me sad. I am just happy for Ollie. He is getting there. But I feel like this chapter was rushed. It has more visible errors compared to your previous ones. Anyway, I still like it :)

No auto correct

Sorry, this entire story has been written on the notes program of my iPhone, which doesn't have auto correct or a spelling and grammar editor, on a moving train, which gives me motion sickness. So there are probably a million errors.

Errors or not.....

It was still a great chapter! Sam couldn't live without Emma, we all know that for sure. Ahhh, so sad. I hope Ollie gets over Sylvia soon, she's a waste. He deserves way better. Go Ollie!!! :)

Loving it

I'm so wrapped up in the story I didn't even notice any errors lol. I love reading a chapter a day and I check each morning! :)

Did Not Even Notice!

It takes on hell of an author, that readers don't even notice the errors. And Ava is just than kind of author. Girl you have nothing to Apologize for. This was a great chapter, it made me sad, emotional, and then happy for the possibility of new love.

Great Job!!!!

Five Stars!!

Awwww

Sorry I missed Emma and Sam. Thanks for mentioning them here.
I loved your stories.

Keep it coming,,,,

Please look up the difference between loose and lose. Great stories otherwise.

I enjoy your writing.

You're good. Your characters are developed and credible, and the sex is part of living, as it should be. I don't mean to offend; one small nit, but "lose" and "loose", think of the first as "looz", and the second as "loos". Best regards from the grammar nazi.