All Comments on 'School Fuck'

by ButteredMarmalade

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
wrong section

Like nearly 90 odd percent of the current stories this one is in the wrong section. It should be in anal so those who don't want to read such garbage aren't mislead then subjected to it. What has happened seems the authors don't find any story is good unless it contains anal sex, they need to get out of the gutter.

DWornockDWornockalmost 11 years ago
1*

I would have rated it 4 or 5 stars if not for the perverted anal.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
what a waste of electrons

a virgin with an eight inch cock - twenty minutes of intercourse (anal at that) the first time - et cetera

Should have been marked "anal" or "sci-fi" - the latter because everything in it was beyond the realm of possibility

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Questions.......

No continuity! One second almost cumming in his pants from a brush past, next a super stud? Huge fat arse? Yet athletic too?

Dirty but substandered.

Not a great effort

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Despite the previous comments I liked it. Its all about what we feel we would like.

ButteredMarmaladeButteredMarmaladealmost 11 years agoAuthor
Story Virgin

this is my first one guys I just did it because I was bored. Thanks for the comments, I'll take those into account next time.

P.s as far as Ellie's body goes, it was kind of hard to describe. This person does exist in real life but with a different name and what I wrote is what I consider to be what she actually looks like

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