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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
hope

there better be a part two or more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
MORE

That was nice! I was hoping it was longer! Kinda was getting me wet ;)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Good story

Waiting for chapter 2 and 3

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

A couple of small typos: "rube" instead of "rub", and "Do" instead of "No" ("Do flimsy material in the way.")

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Huge fantasy of mine

I've experienced this a few times before. Teasing, forbidden massages are one of my favorite things. Well done, I liked the pace!

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