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it is okay, but....
Ok but?
What were the .....s?
I'd like to know!
over too guick
Story was over too quick. Was just getting good
RE: Over too quick
I agree it was over too quickly. Most of my stories are loosely based on reality or based on a fantasy, but this one is purely autobiographical. That's how it really happened!
It's a Busy World..
Nah, not too quick at all...the urgency of it all is an endearing quality to the story..'The I want it and I want it Now!' thing is good....liked it. Daren't tell you how much. Just going to try and find a tin of Campbell's soup...for training purposes...!
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