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Well written
A little different, a nice twist on the ending.
She just couldn't let well enough alone!
DJ
Nicely written.
Nicely written, but totally unbelievable.
Suspension of disbelief
I am reminded of the staging of Shakespearean plays, where a feather or a different belt would make a character unrecognizable. Aside from that, it was a fairly fun read. We all knew at the outset that her plan would not only fail but backfire, but the playing out of the action was amusing
interesting
now will she speak up and deal with it? probably not. and for her, its got her interest and i'd look forward to her getting caught, the cliches, and her out the door. what, me have an opinion here?
5*****
That's funny.
That's funny.
1* !!
So where the part were she fess up
Typical slut, she cheats but has an excuse......not........lol
DWhuecuck is so stupid
he got fired from his job at the M&M factory for throwing out all the W's
anon use some new jokes
Flip Wilson said the same jokes in 1976, shit atleast they were funny then.
I loved it 5*****
She was a hot fuck and really liked the "big guy"! And, I know who she is--poor Tom.
Fred
Dumb plan
She didn't think her husband might have recognized her simply from her height, weight, build and hair color? And when she kissed him? Where were the veils? Is this woman's IQ 10? She's dumber than a stump!
This is from a joke and it wasn't erotic then.
She could only tell her husband by the coin sewn into his jacket? Not his walk, his voice, not even the size of his cock...no, only by the coin. Riiiight. And he wouldn't be able to tell who she was only because he couldn't see her face. Well, holy fuck! These are probably the same people who couldn't tell superman was Clark Kent because of the glasses!
I liked it
But then I'm a sucker for mistaked identity stories. :o)
Gotta Agree With the Clark Kent Theory
"I kissed a man, but didn't recognize his kisses as being different than my husband of x years. His taste, smell, sounds, responses? All the same. And the sex? Yeah, I did kinda, sorta think the dick was a little bit ...er, but the lovemaking? Oh no difference whatsoever."
checked out
Number of your stories before leaving this comment. The LW CATEGORY definitely has types of writers. You fit the mold of guy who is all for wife cheating which is fine
As long as it is the other guys' wives cheating on them with me I am all for it.
But you portray the husbands as spineless fools.
In the writing classes I have taken Students are always told to write from own experiences
You don't have to worry
You are not going to be married long.
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