All Comments on 'Halloween Experiment...'

A little different, a nice twist on the ending.

She just couldn't let well enough alone!

DJ

Nicely written, but totally unbelievable.

I am reminded of the staging of Shakespearean plays, where a feather or a different belt would make a character unrecognizable. Aside from that, it was a fairly fun read. We all knew at the outset that her plan would not only fail but backfire, but the playing out of the action was amusing

now will she speak up and deal with it? probably not. and for her, its got her interest and i'd look forward to her getting caught, the cliches, and her out the door. what, me have an opinion here?

That's funny.

1* !!

Typical slut, she cheats but has an excuse......not........lol

he got fired from his job at the M&M factory for throwing out all the W's

Flip Wilson said the same jokes in 1976, shit atleast they were funny then.

She was a hot fuck and really liked the "big guy"! And, I know who she is--poor Tom.

Fred

She didn't think her husband might have recognized her simply from her height, weight, build and hair color? And when she kissed him? Where were the veils? Is this woman's IQ 10? She's dumber than a stump!

She could only tell her husband by the coin sewn into his jacket? Not his walk, his voice, not even the size of his cock...no, only by the coin. Riiiight. And he wouldn't be able to tell who she was only because he couldn't see her face. Well, holy fuck! These are probably the same people who couldn't tell superman was Clark Kent because of the glasses!

But then I'm a sucker for mistaked identity stories. :o)

"I kissed a man, but didn't recognize his kisses as being different than my husband of x years. His taste, smell, sounds, responses? All the same. And the sex? Yeah, I did kinda, sorta think the dick was a little bit ...er, but the lovemaking? Oh no difference whatsoever."

Number of your stories before leaving this comment. The LW CATEGORY definitely has types of writers. You fit the mold of guy who is all for wife cheating which is fine

As long as it is the other guys' wives cheating on them with me I am all for it.

But you portray the husbands as spineless fools.

In the writing classes I have taken Students are always told to write from own experiences

You are not going to be married long.

Stories like this don't get enough respect in the scoring. This definitely should be a more than 4.5 story (5* for me); but then again scoring for female writers, or writers writing about lead female characters, are not treasured enough. Oh well---thanks for a good story.

But story has headed much lower. As another has stated she certainly would have known it wasn't her husband before the screwing started.

Time for wifey poo to confess!

She should know by now how her

husbands dick would feel in her pussy.

Story has been done often and always better than this.

What a predicament. She sets out to prove her husband was a cheater and it turns out she is. So, does she confess or try to hide the FACT that she is a slut? The story is ok, and I did like the twist at the end. Would like to see another chapter just to see if she is as honest as she makes herself to be. Hmmm. 3 out of 5 stars because it feels like it's missing an ending.

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Not really an ending.