All Comments on 'Colleen and Nathan Bare It All Ch. 01'

Beautifully written, great story, fun, and HOT. I love the whole Colleen and Nathan series. Can't wait for chapter two.

God damn, Slam, you created another goody for our reading pleasure. Burned out the batteries on my vibrator with this one. I love these characters and their conversations with each other. Eagerly awaiting chapter 2.

A very well written story. Give us more stories about this couple.

Very nice! But I was sure Rasta Mon would have some more fun with Colleen! Maybe a return anniversary trip is in their future?

Love the characters you have created in this series of stories. Wonderfully hot and sexy. Now onto the next story.

Colleen is a vision of loveliness into the night. Bright lights, flying elegant pussy wrapped by some wrapped by by sun brown thighs. Drink from the depths of her hone-sweet sweet tits. Ambrosia!

Colleen loves exhibitionism and teasing and paid sex for an audience on her honeymoon. How long do you think her 'elopement after the senior prom' marriage is going to last?

Ten years and no one mentioned the alternating name Miriam/Muriel? I must be more OCD than I thought. Loved it, though. Surely by now you've gone through an editor or two.