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by Anonymous05/01/13

last 3 lines are quite good

you should do an oral, rendition so we can hear what it sounds like, lyrics mean little with most of these metal songs so "just make sure you are playing loud" as the rock punk Ramones used to say, what you hear is the chorus, that might be pepped up a bit

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