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Winter’s Passing ( an acrostic)

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/02/13

*****

Easily a five, but I kind of wish the title was simply the first two words.

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by demure10105/03/13

THis way you can't miss it...

I love acrostics, and the imagery in this one.

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by theognis05/03/13

I understand, demure, but one of the things I like about acrostics is the message is hidden. But they are sometimes easily overlooked, it's true.

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by Maria239405/11/13

lovely descriptions

Your poems always transport me. You do more than just present an image in words, you take this reader into your scenes and visions. My favorite line is "encased in shrieking ice.'

Thank you for another of your beautiful and vivid nature poems'

~maria

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