Great writing, loved this first chapter. Can't wait to hear the backstory on the characters you have introduced.
Well done..very erotic.
Arousing, erotic, taboo... I want more of this
But with the sweet taste of incest -- fantastique!
This was an amazing story. Can't wait for chapter 2!!!
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Good start
Great writing, loved this first chapter. Can't wait to hear the backstory on the characters you have introduced.
Well done..very erotic.
Well done..very erotic.
Wow
Arousing, erotic, taboo... I want more of this
Reminds me of Conan
But with the sweet taste of incest -- fantastique!
Rocked!!!!
This was an amazing story. Can't wait for chapter 2!!!
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