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by DemureDulcinea
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Anonymousabout 11 years agoSuggestions
"I can't catch one, they are moving too fast."
"My steps seem in vain."
"What is there to look forward to?"
Five.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoyou seem to have hit a responsive chord with this rapid fire "speed" poem
which sounds like it is drug induced
"I'm enveloped black.
And I can't come back." are nice lines,
"I only get blue" not so nice
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