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Little Bird

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by Anonymous

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by Hlovestoread05/02/13

She has friends in the skies. She will find her flock.

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by Anonymous05/03/13

if you know anything about birds you can see this is not a bird but a human trapped in a bird's body,

anthropomorphic is the word, although it is lovely to hear about birds,
little birds to not think like philosophers, they just jump and on first attempts they gently flutter to earth and being light weight with wings they usually do not injure themselves, this is more in the vein of the little tug boat that tried or the little train that could, also the line below
"So much more is waiting
In this she's placed her trust" does not work very well, a real stinker, forgive me I do not mean to be harsh

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by demure10105/03/13

A nice read!

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