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by Zodia19505/10/13

I only have one question here. How was Freddy able to go to L.A. when he was still in school? Also, try to keep your story in either 3rd person or 1st because you've switched a few times. Other than that I am finding this series hilarious hehe.

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by Oldpart05/17/13

A very fun read

To me this is an funny spoof and great fun. One of the best when looked at in that light.

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by timemaster01/07/15

Pictures of Characters from this story at http://www.imagefap.com/profile/timemaster6968.

Pictures of Characters from this story at http://www.imagefap.com/profile/timemaster6968. Plus 2 other timestop caption galleries.

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