by StealthBreeder
Slow up on trying to force so many descriptive words into each sentence.
So, did you ever actually fling open your eyes? I mean really fling them? Get a good hold and just whoomp! There they go over the end of the bed and into the wall.
It was okay. When you write watch where the hands are so you aren't misplacing them at the wrong time. Good luck!
Did a great job; now, I WANT MORE!!!
Not too bad of a story. As previously stated, watch how descriptive you attempt to me. A colorful story is great, but an overdone one just feels forced.You also confused metaphors at some points. Personally my favorite was 'causing the bed to creak on its hinges'. This is the first time I have ever heard of a bed having hinges...
And to chytown, why are you in the NonConsent/Reluctance category if you do not like what the stories are about?
I hope she doesn't take the pill. Let nature take it's course. All for a more intriguing story.
Love your screen name and I hope it is indicator of things to come...
Fantastic story for your first submission.
A 38 band means she's fat with small breasts, not that she has big breasts. Lol
Each size of boobs is good for me because i am an ass man.
:-)
I searched for a sexy story to send my boyfriend, and reading this really turned me on. We are going to continue reading the rest of the chapters together. Super hot!
I got very hot reading your story, the same thing happened to me last year.
My husband was away on a a business trip snd my kids were all away, when one night a rapist came into my bedroom and made me scream in passion as he raped me over and over one evening.
I'm 44 married and I will say this night I reached a level of fevered passion I had never known before.the rape was slow at first then harder and harder, Imust have climaxed at least a dozen times and at age of 44 I gave birth to beautiful baby girl.
My wife has rape fantasies and she has hinted and even told me several times that she wants me to take her like this(she even gave me a safeword). Our marriage has been turbulent lately, and I decided to use her fantasies to rekindle the flame. So one night, when both our kids were at her parents house, I pinned her on our bed and I took her unprotected. She struggled against me but never said the safeword so I just kept on going. She moaned in pleasure and we both climaxed several times as I "raped" her repeatedly.
Turns out she was in the middle of her cycle and now she's 3 months pregnant. Nevertheless, we're both very happy to have another child. After she gives birth she's gonna get a ligation so that we can continue our fantasies with no hassle. That safeword is gonna be so handy! ;)
Your one sick bitch anonymous of 44. Was it really rape if you saying you enjoyed yourself
OMG, this is exactly how I want to be taken. A sexy strong, tall and athletic well-built man, A stranger. With the package to match, overpowering me, ripping my panties off, and just taking what he wants. Thrusting hard and deep within me, holding me right where he wants me. Forcing me to take all of him, as he knows the control he would have over me. I would be reluctant at first, but with the filled passion, I would give in to my inner deep desires.. I love this story, The Intruder Ch. 1. I love this whole story, and the others as well. I've never felt so turned on. Big thumbs up to this story.
OMG, this was the best story I have read. I've never been so turned on, I want this more than anything. To be taken just like that, by an intruder, a Fierce and beastly man. Tall and athletic and well-built, with the package to match. Coming in, and holding me down, ripping my panties, and doing whatever he wanted to me. Welll, i don't wear panties, but you get my point. Knowing the control he had over me, I would fight reluctantly, but give into my innermost deep desires. I love this story, it really touches me to a core. It's sexy and primal....
I love this story so much, I came back to read it again! Please come back and write more! Finish the story you discontinued maybe??? I LOVE your works!!! Miss you stealthbreeder!
This is amazing. I love that she enjoyed being fucked like that. Nothing to be embarassed. It's her body and even if it was forced, that was a great fuck.