by samdare
I enjoyed your story so far. I"m hoping there is more to come! Unusually, your spelling and context were very good. Most authors have to be told to get a proof reader.
... for new authors! Another well-written and knickers-wetting story from a new writer; welcome, thank you, please bring us more of this amazingly hot story and please have five stars!
ONE OF THE FEW STORIES THAT I HAVE READ TO THE END AND WAS LOOKING FOR MORE. GREAT WRITING, IF YOU BECOME A REGULAR WRITER I WILL BECOME A REGULAR READER.
You have my attention. Nice character development and action. Thanks.