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on a roll
The hook is set
Oops I Did It Again
I don't know how this ended up on erotic couplings, it's part of a series I have in the non erotic section. Technophobia, a condition I suffer greatly from, must have reared it's ugly head again. Apologies
QHML1
yet again!!
after reading this tale.....you have reinforced the notion I have that you would be a very interesting fellow to talk with.....as in conversations you'd like to have. I am a voracious reader of all genres, always look forward to your next submission...it matters not to me where you place the story....the quality of your work speaks for itself and will shine where ever its placed
I think...
I'm gonna really enjoy this series of stories!
This is great
You've infused your story with the same sense of spontaneity and freeform as the tv show. I'll be watching for your following chapters. BTW, thank you for sharing your talents at no charge. I'm feeling blessed by your generosity.
Great story.......
..... but what paintings were on the wall for the last show? :-)
Most enjoyable series of stories. I sincerely hope to be reading them for many months to come.
Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Please keep them coming.
Brujay
Great concept
Great idea and presentation. Your work is exceptional, always leaves me thinking.
Patient
We're all patiently waiting. From the onset it appears to be a great series that has started. Hopefully, it won't fizzle due to neglect. Keep the faith!
Oops I Did It Again
I believe you meant to reference Richard Thompson not David Thompson.
fine storyline!
I think you meant Winterland, not Winter Palace. Just a quibble.
Thanks For Sharing*****
Great story very entertaining.
Minor Point
The wife in the couple was said to be 71, and they’ve been married 48 years, which means she was 23 when they got married. But she said they were in their teens when they married.
brother love 03
Ed Grocott
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