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Oh yes
One of the best stories in a long time on LW. Please post more.
re: anonymous-Oh yes
You got to be kidding. To actually state this is one of the best stories in a long time is laughable. You don't have the foggiest idea of what good erotica is. If this is the best, I hate to see what you consider the worst. The other comment is closer to reality. 1* for effort.
GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for this fantastic story!!!
Development?
Girls are SO easy! Pix in clothes. Pix in NO clothes. No Pix, just cum! And the Bull did NOT have to spring for a movie or a nice dinner!
From shy lady who isn't sure she can pose for a photog to spreading legs in 3 'dates' without a single rationale as to how or why she changed! Too much of a stretch of our credulity!
Lickideesplit said it all.
I agree with Lickideesplit. Your story is just a list of 'what happened'.
Erotica must also address why it happened, and what the participants felt about it - the emotional journey as well as the physical.
I like as a fantasy
Its always nice to think yuor wife being taken by another man but fantasy doesn't hurt reality does I had my fantasy and when it was real I could not handle it.
Watching my wife kissing and screaming as she was coming was to much
and every day the image of another man fucking her better then I could result a divorce.
Loved it
Isn't life grand....Nothings perfect but damn it sure was hot.Tapping throbbing cockhead waiting for pt2
good story
....but has been done better with more build up 3 "dates" stretches the imagination for a shy wife. Spread your story out more and give us more conversation and emotion and more reality. You could always cut writing short by saying "after about x number of dates...... " etc.
Still tossed off to it though
Wow!
Loved it. Mr. Daly can take photos of my wife anytime!
"Sticky wet cunt" really?
Sex stories are one thing but TRYING to be disgusting.......another.
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