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Good story
Interesting, not usually what I like, but you made it work, I'll be sad to see it go, but I am for all good stories I read, whether they end or simply never get finished. Good work, I'd like to see a sequel series, but that's just me
sad ending
;(
Why did you inish it here?
There is a great potential in this excellent story, for example the raiders could get them back in the North, then they could do something that changes the status quo, etc.
Hope that you think about that.
Deffinately More!
Deffinately need a follow on or a sequel, or to see how it works on the north side would be awesome!
Please continue! This is excellent.
If you wrote this into a novel- I would buy it. I wish it was more than 5 chapters.
Good Escalation
I like the way this series is paced. I wish the sex scenes were more detailed, and I would have loved more character development, but, more than that, I like the way it escalates from one chapter to the next, taking Petunia from being a scared prisoner all the way to a coveted status symbol. That kind of progression is what makes or breaks longer stories, and you nailed it here.
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