Sleepwalker

LMAO

Ok, this was just funny... and a little hot.

EDIT, the errors took so much away from it.

get a

new hobby you stink.

I thought it was a good one ...

A new twist for me ... got me there, if you know what I mean, (wink, wink)

One star

Yup...won't read this guys shit, but I will give the loser a one.

Excellent job! Amusing, a bit hot, and very novel. Will look for others to come.

Saw it cumming...

The only question was whether Sweetie was shilling for Hubby, or whether it was a Hubby trick mainly for his Sweetie that he managed to leverage for some strange! Turns out to be the latter! Wish I had thought of this umpteen years ago! Fun read!

Cannot believe some people (esp. in erotica sites) have so little sense of humor or play! PITY!

Rape is Rape*

A swift kick in the balls would have did the job of waking him up. Rape is not a subject to play with!!

You think it's fun to be raped? You obviously haven't been or know anyone who has been and let me tell you that 'rape' scene you wrote is nothing like it, but it was still rape! Not worth rating this garbage.

Cute

Thanks. 5*****