All Comments on 'A Pack of Tales Ch. 07'

is it me or do people pant a lot in this story

LOL, well they are wolves so they pant and whine a lot. Some purists dislike this, and I have a string of hilarious one star reviews for my badly written first story on Amazon saying mine are not 'real' werewolves because they whine. (These reviews are written by people whose cousins are 'real' werewolves or vampires or something of course.) I always imagined that werewolves would be a little bit ;) like a really cool pet dog, so they pant and whine and chew up your favourite shoes if you're not careful.

(Get off! cub. Give me that stiletto thigh high black boot back! Now. Sit. Si-i-it. Excuse me a moment ....)

I just feel like I read about a woman fucked by an infant. The panting didn't bother me.

And what is it with this 'story' 'scene' clarification. Just surprise us.

I put the story/scene details up so people can follow the story while avoiding chapters which have kinds of sex in they don't enjoy. If you aren't turned on by cub/MILF sex, perhaps you should just avoid stories which are labelled as cub/MILF sex scenes.

Sure werewolves may whine, but they are wolves, not dogs. These should be called weredogs instead for their overall behaviour.