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More please
I hope that you will continue this story. I love hearing both perspectives.
More!
This is excellent, thank you for sharing.
Please...dear lord
For the sake of my sanity, it would be absolutely wonderful if you finished this story.
please continue!
wow i hope You continue with this story because... i mean.. well i couldn't believe this was the only part of the story, i was looking for page 2!
only a sadist would leave you hanging
the seduction isn't complete..I am with the others..please continue
aw come on
please? Please continue this? It has been started so perfectly, the rest of the story is just begging to be written.
seriously?
Why would you post such a well written first chapter and then not update your readers as to whether you intend to see the story through? It's frustrating... please don't take offense... It's a testament to your writing skills, but please let us know if you're going to write more of this story. Thanks!
Sorry for the cliffhanger....
Hey guys...I sincerely apologize for leaving all of you hanging here. This was a story that I'd written a while ago and honestly didn't think it would gather much attention. I logged in that day and submitted the story and then forgot that I'd uploaded it. To answer all of yall's questions...I hadn't planned to write anymore on this story, but I may now consider it. I'm still learning how Literotica works and how to reach my readers more, so again, I apologize and thank you all for being patient.
xoxo,
Alley
Please.....
Please continue the story!
This has the makings to be top rated!
nope
Wow, another magic dick story, how original. Was the slut shaming really necessary?
please continue
This was one of the first stories I read on Literotica and was disappointed to see that it was most likely going to be yet another well written first-chapter-only story on this site. Am glad to see you're revisiting this story - would love to see another chapter. Thanks!
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