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A dog?
He killed a poor fucking DOG because she had bought it for him? No wonder she cheated! What a psychotic dickl
chagrined did you even read the story?
or are you just an idiot? he didnt kill the dog
Come on Mate
His wife was steadfast in her story. The Son reckons he knows what has happened to his mother. Take a hair sample which would confirm the drugs issue and start behaving like a real man. To crucify a wife the way he did is inexcusable. If she was half the women he thought she was then listen. It costs you nothing...
Thoughts
"Victor," she said, "he was dying inside. He was sad. He needed someone."
And there were no SINGLE women, or women in “open” relationships available? And again, if it was all so good and right, why not tell/ask Victor? Surely he would approve of her good deed, right?
I'm glad that he didn't have Chelsea put down like it seemed at first.
Since he was starting a new life, why not sell all the stuff for as good a price as he could get quickly? I understand that he doesn't want to take the extra time to get top dollar, but he surely didn't have to sell things for a song, either, and he certainly could use the cash!
Carvohi, I really respect you,
Your imagination and your forgiving attitude. Honestly, I used to read a lot of BTB stories. I probably still will. But you've gone against the grain and instead of accepting cuckolding or burning the bitch, you tend to choose forgiveness.
Reading this story is actually shocking. You describe the emotional pain very well, especially of the wife's. It is incredibly horrible, and anyone with a little empathy can feel it. I can see how the husband feels revolted by all of it and can't keep any of that around, but the wife is upset by memories of a life thrown away. Sadly, she doesn't understand that life was built on a lie and changes everything he ever knew, which can quite frankly drive a person crazy.
I have a friend who lied to me, she has a secret life where she goes hook-ups with people on dating sites. It was very sad finding out the truth from another friend, because I really loved and respected her, and still do, but it's difficult to deal with when everything is flipped around and the extent of the lie is so big and it's not brought open and reconciled. At least she should have been honest and open and not told so many lies.
I can perhaps hazard a guess why you never finished the story. Perhaps it was too horribly painful, and you just wanted to avoid concluding the story. It is the most emotionally charged story you have written I think. Not particularly for the husband, but for the wife certainly. Anyway thanks for writing
Good story
But as you know it is not completed. Please finish it. I enjoyed your chapter and I understand his feelings. Why is it if the wife cheats everyone feels sorry when the husband reacts and walks away. But when the husband walks away it is oh poor mama u have been so bad to her. Why did u not give her all the money and things plus keep working to support her and her boyfriends. The wife got off lucky.
Unfinished Business
I recently read the original Alex lover story even though I had read your addition to it previously I hope he does as you suggest and adds to your story but failing that please give us your ending as it is a very good story that stands on its own merits.
Second time through...
This chapter gets five stars. Well done.
Unfinished.
Thanks for the offering.
Bravo for that new way of an idiotic story!!!
Hate is baggage. Life's too short to be pissed off all the time. It's just not worth it. That story is ointment to all betrayed!!!
Thoughts
“He was sad. He needed someone." – As has been said, why her? Because he was already crushing on her? That’s why it SHOULDN’T have been her! That’s like asking the mouse to guard the cheese!
“She begged me to think about what she called 'us'.” – Oh, like she did while fucking Harry?
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