Maid Made My Day

English?

Hi there. It would be really good if you learned English grammar, punctuation and sentence structure before you post something for people to read. This reads as if it were written by someone for whom English is a second or third language or someone who never progressed beyond a child's level of understanding. I cannot remember the last time I read something so badly written on all levels - language, plotting, grammar, punctuation etc, etc etc. Total rubbish.

I so totally disagree with anoymous's comments. The 'bad' English adds to the stories drama and fun.
I personally, look forward to reading another 'maid my day'

This story is total fucking shite, go suck your dogs bollocks instead of posting drivel mate!!!!