All Comments on 'Practice Makes Perfect'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Not bad

Not bad at all

Lil_kittyLil_kittyalmost 17 years ago
wonderful

i thought it was brilliant - amazing writing skills!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Where are you going with this........

I like the way this story begins, you've left it wide open - it could stay as just a FANTASY or develop into something more. If there is more to this than you have posted - POST IT.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
more

kept my on the edge of my seat

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