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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/14/13

Many young guys

Many young guys can benefit from training by an older woman. Family members or friends are best.

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by BellaQueenMisch05/17/13

Transition

The transition from "indignant" Ms. Demeter to "willing and teasing" Ms. Demeter was too abrupt and improbable... "Oh hey, this kid is jerking off in my bed. You twat! Oh wait, let's fuck!"

Other than that I loved the characterization and the plot.
Huzzah!

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