Bound to Please

Any comment are much appreciated! let me know what u think =]

Loved it!

Thank you, SexyMinnie, and welcome to Literotica. This was some introduction to your writing talent! Please bring us more - you are so good at this - five stars.

She is letting herself be used like this b/c its what she wants....she is a submissive and aims to please her master which is the gentleman at the end of the story....She enjoys being used, and likes that she cant see who is using her....this is actually a big fantasy of mine...

Loved it

looking foward to more to cum. Thank you.

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Hey SexyMinnie,

Welcome to Literotica :) I am a newbie here also and have posted. I am going to be posting part 2 of the series tomorrow.

I just read your work. I love the momentum, it's perfect. Everything about it was exciting and arousing. And believe me when I tell you, with erotica, it takes a particular quality of writing to arouse me.

I think this piece could do with some basic editing and proofing. I would be more than happy to offer you both for your future posts. Mainly because I like your style of writing and I think your work will stand out even further once edited.

Anyway, no harm if you're not interested. Take a look at my work and let me know if you are and I will give you my details and we can take it from there.

All the best,
J.D.

SMOKIN HOT

WOW, she sounds like a woman I would like to meet.

My favorite part is when they started fucking her asshole.
I LOVE ANAL.

:)

Not close to brave enough for this to even be a fantasy for me, but damn girl! Very hot scene. Your comment said the 'leader' at the end is her Master. You hinted at that with supportive comments from one of the men. I suppose who else would lead her away naked in a collar. It would have been good for me if he had dropped a 'pet' or she a 'Master,' just to leave no doubt. I like this type of scene much better when Master/Dom/Hubby is there to see to her safety. It appeals to my inner fraidy cat. 5*

This was for a contest I entered and won...=] there was a 2,000 word limit that's why there is a little less detail then I wanted... I'm thinking on writing a much longer or a bunch of stories with these characters....but idk yet I have no time to write =[

Hi, I'm a new writer as well, loved your story, very fast flowing, just how I like it, please write more xx

Great story

I love the pace of the story, how she is treated as an object - great. Please write some more.

Great story

I loved the story, harsh, fast paced and left her well used like the slut she (and me) are. Was good to see one that started out very strong and stayed that way till the end. I enjoy other women that also believe like I do (and my husband) is that a woman's place is one of naked, bound and used for their pleasure. Thanks, please keep writing. Nadine