The Ballad of Zachery Carson Ch. 01

I always enjoy your stories

Keep up the good writing & thanks.

Always good to see one of your stories appear.

Can't wait for the next installment.

Western flair

Love the western flair. Can't wait to see what happens next

ONCE AGAIN YOU HAVE DONE AN OUTSTANDING PORTRAYAL

of life in the old west with its tribulations, TK U MLJ LV NV

Excellent strat

Looking forward to more.

where is the rest???

more please

Great story!

Great

Woody another great start to a wonderful tale. Keep up the wonderful work and thanks for sharing

A good read so far. A 5 Star Read.

The stories that I enjoy reading are like what you write. Being able to paint a clear picture in my mind's eye about what is going on is what keeps my interest. Having been in the area you write about in this story, I could see the trail and the spring, the smoke alerted me that something was not right. Bravo, for being able to paint with the use of words. I look forward to finding more of your stories.

wonderful start

as always. Great to see you writing.

It DOES Read Good, Woody

but you only get four stars**** for letting Zach shoot that horse. With known raiders in the area he would never let off a shot and let enyone in the area know where he was. He would have pulled his knife and slit the horses throat - a lot more blood, but a hell of a lot safer.

In the best traditions of westerns.

You spin a good yarn, sir. I don't know what I like best: the way the story moves along quickly, not getting bogged down with too much detail, but enough to See the country and Know the people, or the surprising twists in the plot. It's all good. And a G rated story is So refreshing, thanks for your posts here.

zack 01

starts off good see you at the end.
Ed Grocott
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