All Comments on 'Exclusive Club Remembered Ch. 02'

by Kippy189

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LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggalmost 11 years ago
The story is not playing to it's inherent strengths

What makes this story different from the standard non-consent is the myriad conspiracy that goes into this forced encounters. I expected hints and glimpses into the set up. The main character is a little bovine & it's not that novel a thrill to get her POV as she's put thru her sensual paces.

It's competently done, but the potential of the introductory setup is completely underutilized. The thimble sized story servings are an irritant as well. I know I'm complaining a bit here, but as a reader who's quintuple starred Kippy189 on over half of his stories - the criticism is coming from a fan's viewpoint & not that of some prude hater.

49greg49gregalmost 11 years ago
I enjoyed it.

The more detailed description of the wife's story is interesting, perhaps a 're-do' with it combined with the original would be in order when and if it's all concluded. Definitely a 'five star' story.

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