All Comments on 'Anthea Shocks Father James'

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Pirate TregarePirate Tregarealmost 11 years ago
nice story!

Very well done. Not much room for improvement, actually! Especially like the "dessert" at the end, it sounded delicious!!!

MuskratSamMuskratSamalmost 11 years ago
Great!

I was just thinking about writing a priest-themed story - and planning to see what was on literotica. Very timely. And hot!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Fun story

Many women have fantasy of seducing priest. A few priests take full advantage of situation.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Why?

Why did you start off writing in present tense then change to past tense?

It doesn't make for good reading.

Stick to one.

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