by fantasyboy
Very well done. Not much room for improvement, actually! Especially like the "dessert" at the end, it sounded delicious!!!
I was just thinking about writing a priest-themed story - and planning to see what was on literotica. Very timely. And hot!
Many women have fantasy of seducing priest. A few priests take full advantage of situation.
Why did you start off writing in present tense then change to past tense?
It doesn't make for good reading.
Stick to one.